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Submitted: January 30, 2006
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full view to see. :aww:

this is a short story strip i submitted to an anthology magazine. the deadline was today and i only found out about it about 8 days ago, so it was a bit of a rush to get it done and posted ^^; i decided to use it as a chance to practice drawing ermine in his comic strip form, based off [link] . i was meant to be doing homework when i did this :XD: so much to do, all shoved aside for four pages.

i got a rejection for another one of my comics a few days ago too. i have an idea of what i need to improve upon, but i'd really like some critique to help me get better. i don't want to draw all of my idea for a new comic and then realize it's all a bunch of crap. >_< (i already know ermine looks really weird in the last panel)

ermine and promesse... copyright me 2006.
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Wow~ I like it~ I'm so happy to be able to see your style in a comic~ It's really cute and simple... I love the shot of Alice's eyes... nice~~

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"Donuts. Is there anything they can't do?"
-Homer J. Simpson
This is just so lovely. :D I think it's excellent work my love! But alas, I cannot critique you for I can't draw worth beans! ^^ But I really like this! :D :hug:
A thoroughly unsentimental and oddly moving encounter; beautifully drawn and full of a musically knowing rhythm of closeups and far shots; very compelling and involving.
Have you seen ~raquelissima's comics yet?

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To be perfectly honest, Inde- I think this is amazing. You conveyed so much emotion without going all 'emo'. It was beautifully directed,aswell. I know I should be giving you constructive critique but I just can't think of anything wrong with it.

If I had your comic skills,Well....I'd write a comic!

Excellent work

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I am a firm believer in Dr. Douchebag's Magic Slut-Boning Technique for Nerds.
beans are good :giggle: thank you!
Never mind-- ~raquelissima's taken her entire gallery away... :sniff:

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:glomp: thank you! i'm no good at doing the whole angsty-darkness-emo thing though, i always end up including a joke when i try to do that :XD:
i had a look at some on her website, they look so cool! :wow: thanks for linking me to them! :glomp:

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